second illustrated story nearly complete

I liked the idea of the first illustrated story so much I decided to do a second one. The theme continues to be "Tiffany sends culotte to The Photographer for shoots". This time, he takes her out in public, to a strip club where she dances for a group of drunk rowdies. Nothing horrible happens other than she is humiliated. I like the idea of making these stories. I wonder if anyone's reading them? This is the outfit my character shows up in at The Photographer's hotel room.

And this is the outfit he wears as they head out to the club.

To see the story, click "Illustrated Stories" on the menu bar. And please DO leave comments!